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Writer’s Block: Curing the Affliction – Technique #5

In this fifth edition of the writer’s block series, let’s discuss how to make use of technique #5, understand your audience and please them. This method encourages you to think differently and write differently. It also provides you with opportunities to be more creative in developing subjects to write about.

I’m going to draw on recent experience to show how this technique can be used.

I was tasked with writing an article about gardening for an audience of women who were about 50 years old. I’m a man, so imagining what women would like to read about was a challenge all by itself. I’m in my mid-fifties, but since men don’t ever grow up, my age was, of course, no help either.

In order to score a home run with my article, I needed to better understand my audience and then write something that would please them. My first step was to review the website carefully to see how it was designed, organized and written. My mission was to create an image in my mind of how the average reader looked, acted, spoke, walked and held themselves. I needed to create a virtual audience in my mind so I could organize my thoughts and present them in a manner that would be accepted and enjoyed.
No matter how ridiculous it might sound, I invented a vision of just one reader, and I used this vision as my target audience. See if you can identify the audience I needed to please just by reading my description of this imaginary woman.

An older woman, tall, with long wavy dark hair and a few natural accents of gray. She was full of grace and style, strolling through the spacious interior of her fine home. She was wearing an elegant house coat and seemed at peace with her surroundings and the rest of the world. Her home was tidy and tastefully decorated. She would silently sit down at a small, round table in her breakfast nook each morning to enjoy a cup of aromatic coffee and admire the fine trimmed backyard of her home. The landscape behind her home was simple, groomed, and surrounded by a well-maintained cedar privacy fence. She would have two cups of coffee, one while just enjoying her pleasant surroundings and gathering her thoughts for the day, and the other while reading my article.

With that vision, I had my work cut out for me. There was no way I was going to foul up that woman’s morning by writing an article that didn’t resonate with her and others like her.

So, the vision of her helped me identify the style of writing that would be necessary. It would need to be soft, descriptive, leaning towards sumptuousness, and something that could be touched and experienced. I had never written anything like that before – I’m largely a technical writer – so this was indeed a challenge. But, I had a clear understanding of my audience, so it would be all my fault if I didn’t hit the target.

The second part of the challenge for me was to identify a topic that my audience would be interested in. I had to determine the proper topic to address under the general category of gardening. I just couldn’t start writing about trimming trees, pruning bushes, growing carrots or canning tomatoes. My audience wouldn’t appreciate that. So, what would they appreciate? I started to envision a sun room or conservatory – something that would compel my audience to have their cup of coffee out among the plants and flowers. I decided on something that would be functional as well as complimentary to the home – a kitchen greenhouse made of metal framing and glass. It was elegant, useful, and something I could write about from my own experience.

So, if we understand our audience better, we can write in a manner that pleases them. That would be one of the main purposes of writing – pleasing our readers so they want to continue reading what we write. Our understanding of the audience also affords us an opportunity to imagine topics that they might enjoy. If we can put ourselves in their shoes or have a very clear vision of who they are, our imaginations can start to identify a healthy list of subjects to choose from. Once we have our list of topics, we can use technique #1 (drill down deep) and #3 (make a hit list and then re-hit the list) to identify quite a large assortment of articles for development.

Did I hit the target with my article? Well, the editor of the site told me that she was my target audience and my article had her ready to kill for a conservatory. I was pleased to get that kind of reaction from the editor, and now I’ll let you judge for yourself whether my kitchen greenhouse article serves as an example of technique #5, understand your audience and please them.

Clair Schwan hosts Self Reliance Works.com where he and his team of writers meet the challenge of regularly writing about nearly everything under the sun that is oriented towards self-reliance, including written and oral communications.

 
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Posted by on July 27, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

Book Review: Darkhouse by Karina Halle

Summary

In Darkhouse, our protagonist is a misfit of a young woman named Perry. She works as a receptionist, a job she despises and shows no interest in, but is unsure of what else to do.  She had, in the past, been a worry to her parents because of her use of drugs, her weight and anger problems and even earlier because as a child she seemed unable to tell the difference between her “imaginary” friends and real people.  Now she is in her early 20’s, has a job and has lost most of the excess weight she once carried.

Still, she has little self-confidence, is occasionally plagued by nightmares,  and has a somewhat complicated relationship with her 15-year-old sister Ada who is very pretty and popular.  Ada runs her own very popular, and somewhat lucrative, fashion blog and has already made a name for herself in her online community.

She drifts along this way, just trying not to get fired, until a visit to her uncle’s house.  During a party, Perry wanders off to explore the old abandoned lighthouse on the property.  There she meets a man who is following a story about the lighthouse for an online show he has pitched to his boss.  The night goes from weird to weirder when things start happening in the lighthouse that Perry can’t explain, and that seem  to echo her recent nightmares.

After going home, Ada becomes sick with what could be swine flu and is under a temporary quarantine in her room so she doesn’t infect the rest of the family.  She asks Perry to fill in on her blog for a couple of days since she is too sick to do it, so Perry writes an account of her experience at the lighthouse.  To her surprise, it is a huge success.  She is offered the chance at a promotion at work based on her post, and is also contacted by the man she met at the lighthouse, Dex.  She is excited about both offers, but more intrigued by Dex’s offer—and by Dex himself.

Dex wants Perry to help him get her uncle’s permission to go back into the lighthouse, and to act as a sort of partner in ghost hunting.  He believes Perry is more sensitive to strange places than most people, based on their first meeting.  She agrees, and they head out for a long weekend of exploring.

Review

Karina Halle’s book, the first in the “Experiment in Terror” series, is a great introduction both to the premise of the series and the characters.  Perry is very sympathetic in her uncertainty because she expresses many of the concerns that we all face at one time or another.  Dex is something of an enigma because we only see him from Perry’s point of view, and she can’t quite figure him out herself.  Perry’s relationship with her sister Ada is just a side story through the book, but I found it interesting because Ada comes across sometimes as the more mature one, even though she is seven years younger than Perry.

The scary parts were very creepy, and I found myself not wanting to read them at night.  The descriptions in the lighthouse were vivid and added to the frightening feel of the place.

Halle is able to make the reader feel, as Perry does, that Dex is not only hard to read, but completely inconsistent.  Every time it seems something about him is coming into focus, you realize that it’s not exactly what you thought it would be.

Darkhouse is another great summer read.  If you’re looking for Dickens, look elsewhere.  But if you are looking for a good, spooky read that won’t take up all of your precious reading time, this is definitely a good choice.  I look forward to reading the next book in the series!

RATING:  4 stars

 
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Posted by on July 21, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

Do moms get days off?

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This post is a blatant theft from Rachelle Gardner’s blog.  You can see her original post, asking “Do you ever take a day off?” here.  Generally, I don’t try to “copycat” other blogs, but reading her post made me think about my life, and the lives of freelancers in general.  Mostly, though, about work-at-home moms.

My mom worked full-time when I was growing up.  My parents divorced, and she had no other choice.  I was lucky enough to have her home with me full-time for the first four or so years of my life, but then she was back out in the workforce doing the 9-5 thing (or 8:30 – 4:30 in her case if I remember correctly).  She worked Monday through Friday in a job where she was, in my opinion, frequently smarter than the people she worked under.  I’ve done that myself, and know just how much it sucks to go to work every day knowing you are taking orders from some ass who couldn’t competently be in charge of a cat, much less an office.  Not that all of my bosses/higher-ups were like that, nor were all of my mom’s.  We’ve both had friendships come from work too.

I am lucky enough to be working from home (mostly).  I am with my youngest all day, and my two older kids when they are not in school or somewhere else.  I am here when my husband leaves for work, and when he gets home.  I don’t have to drive to work in rain or snow or sleet or hail….you get the idea.

But there is something about my mom’s job and mine that are similar.  When she got home from her day job, or when I’m not doing work online or writing an article or story, we are in our other job, as “mom.”  There are kids to be fed and taken care of, pets, a house needing cleaning, laundry to be done, dishes (which never seem to end).  Books to be read to kids, games to be played, shows to be watched together, movies.  Trips to do things together, trips to the park or the lake or the ocean, trips to the grocery store, or that Axis of Evil, Walmart (just my opinion, nobody needs to litigate).  There is homework to correct, bills to pay, rooms to be straightened, dishes to wash (yes, again), and kids to be tucked in.  It never ends.

The only difference is that for her, eventually I went to sleep and she could at least spend a little time reading or watching her own shows–when she wasn’t up worrying about how to pay for my braces or how long her car would last, of course.  On my end, when the kids are asleep or M. is napping, I’m working.  Online, on the house, on a story, whatever.  I do get to read a bit, but I don’t get to pick what I read very often because there is always a new book needing to be reviewed somewhere.  There is just no such thing as down time.

I still feel lucky, nonetheless.  I love my kids, and even on the days when they drive me crazy (and there are quite a few of those at times), I still would rather be aggravated by them than my former district manager any day of the week.  Being home is one of the greatest things in life.  There will never be an office anywhere else that could compare.  It’s not the house (which is a disaster, don’t ask), or the location, or the view although it is lovely.  It’s being in one’s own space and not having to pretend to be happy and upbeat when you’re not or professional when you secretly want to dye your hair bright pink.  Or maybe red.  Not that I would ever do that.  Or even consider it.  Really.

But when you boil it all down, what it comes down to is this:  Moms do NOT get days off.

I can’t speak for dad’s.  I’m not one, and never will be.  I’m not trying to exclude them, so don’t anyone get their panties in a bunch over it.  I’m just saying that, from my perspective as a mom (and not a dad), there’s no such thing as a day off.  I’ve heard all the “take time for yourself” nonsense, but reality gets in the way of that.  If I get to shower without a kid in the bathroom “keeping me company,” and not hearing a three-year-old burst into tears because of some imagined slight or something not being done “the way mama does it,” it’s a banner day.  Come to think of it, if I GET to shower it’s a banner day.  I swear, there was a brief period when things were particularly busy that my youngest would see me getting showered and dressed, and ask me in a panicky voice, “Where are you going?” because to her, a clean, dressed mama–complete with makeup and not wearing a ponytail–meant I was going out somewhere (job interview, shopping, whatever) without her.

Do I take vacations with my family?  Occasionally.

Do I do fun things with my family? Absolutely.

Do I get a day off–meaning one where you get to relax and do whatever you want (or do nothing) for a whole day?  Of course not!  Do you?

 
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Posted by on July 18, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

Falling Hard by J.K. Coi

Available today! Get your copy now from Carina Press!

Visit her at: www.jkcoi.com

About the Author:

J.K. Coi is a multi-published, award winning author of contemporary and paranormal romance and urban fantasy. She makes her home in Ontario, Canada, with her husband and son and a feisty black cat who is the uncontested head of the household. While she spends her days immersed in the litigious world of insurance law, she is very happy to spend her nights writing dark and sexy characters who leap off the page and into readers’ hearts.

Website:www.jkcoi.com

 
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Posted by on July 18, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

Today’s Wonders

Wonderworks

We’re having a very unmotivated day here today.  M. has been feeling a little under the weather over the last few days, although you wouldn’t know it to watch her run around in her usual crazy way.  She has had tummy trouble, and is on a temporary diet of bland, bland and more bland.  Luckily, she likes most of those things anyway.  She does get rebellious however when it comes to no milk.  She LOVES milk.

The farmer’s market in town is today, but I think we may skip it.  It’s not much fun when you’re not feeling well, and M. isn’t yet.  We might go tomorrow to the one in the next town over, but I’m not sure.  We love the farmer’s markets.  There are so many good things to eat there, and the people are usually very nice.

The older kids are having a great time in Florida.  I miss them both, but this has been a great experience.  They got to meet an astronaut, and she gave the kids autographs and let them take pictures with her.  They also went to a very cool science-type museum called WonderWorks. If you haven’t seen you should definitely look them up.  It looks very cool.

I have work around the house that I should be doing, and work online that I’ll do throughout the day.  Plus, there might be a nap if M. takes one too.  Who’s with me?

 

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Guest Post: Writer’s Block: Curing the Affliction – Technique #4

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In this fourth installment of the series, let me discuss a technique that I call identifying your passion and going for it. You’ll find this as item number four on the list of 24 techniques introduced in the first article is this series.

Nearly everything we do with enthusiasm and flair is fired by passion, so this approach should come natural to many of us. Best of all, harnessing our passion can be one of the most powerful techniques for creating lots of good written material that is filled with heart and the voice of experience. And we ought to be able to write with a degree of consistency simply because we have a passion for our topic.

It’s easy to write well and often about our passions because:

  • We can write as if we’re sitting around a table talking with others about the subjects that we are so very excited about.
  • Our interest and enthusiasm for the topics should be nearly inexhaustible.
  • Chances are good that we have plenty of experience with matters associated with our passions.
  • Our passions drive us to be more than casual observers, so we should be filled with insights, facts and anecdotes.
  • We’ll be able to rise well above the level of small talk about our subject matters.
  • It’s very likely that our passions have been with us for years, and that means we have years of discussions, experiences and thinking to draw from.

Let me give you an example from my playbook.

One of my passions is frugal living. It’s been a sure-fire way for me to save money, build wealth and give myself a fair degree of financial freedom. I created a website to help others understand more about how to live in a frugal manner, making good use of their hard-earned income. But before I launched even a single page, I had written about 120 full-length pages on various aspects of frugal living. My passion to save money, get more for my money, and be a good steward of financial resources had helped me write for several days straight, and that gave me the foundation to launch a website and build it into a robust source of information in a matter of a just a few weeks.

You can harness your passions, no matter what they are.

Let’s assume for a moment that you have several passions, but none of them are exactly aligned with what you need to write about – topics suitable for a home and garden magazine. Perhaps you have a passion for personal security, structural engineering and chemical engineering, but these aren’t exactly the type of skills and experience one might expect to find associated with a home and garden magazine writer. Is it possible to write for that magazine by harnessing the three unusual passions you have? I think so. Here’s what I’d consider writing about:

  1. Personal security tips for around the home and out in the community.
  2. Common home alarm system components and how they work.
  3. Proper application of physical barriers and intrusion detection equipment.
  4. Safe rooms as part of the initial design of a home.
  5. Basic structural concepts and how they’re applied when building decks, car ports and tree houses.
  6. Common structural mistakes homeowners make when building decks, gazebos and outbuildings.
  7. Structural materials and their optimal application around the home.
  8. Repair of home structural elements – concrete block, poured concrete, and pier and beam foundations.
  9. Easy to make household cleaning solutions.
  10. Household chemicals that are hazardous when mixed.
  11. Proper storage locations, conditions and shelf life expectations for common household chemicals.
  12. Multiple uses of and substitutions for common household chemicals.

So, there you have 12 ideas for articles that can be created from your passions that at first don’t seem to fit with your writing assignment. All you have to do now is understand your audience and please them. That’s technique #5, which I’ll be discussing in the next article in this series.

If you’re wondering how to harness your passions to create more copy, you just have to look at things from a different perspective. Find the common ground that you share with your potential audience, and when you do you can let fly with your passions and create interesting and informative articles that you’ll be enthusiastic about writing.

Clair Schwan hosts Frugal Living Freedom.com, a website powered by his tremendous passion for frugal living. He’s also the managing editor of Self Reliance Works.com where he and his team of writers meet the challenge of regularly writing about nearly everything under the sun that is oriented towards self-reliance, including many forms of communication.

 
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Posted by on July 15, 2011 in Guest Post, writing

 

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What’s the oldest piece of clothing you still own and wear?

An "Officer Friendly" tshirt from the Hartford Police Dept. which I’ve had since I was little in the 70′s.

Ask me anything!

 
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Posted by on July 15, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

July Goals

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It’s July.  It’s actually the 13th of July, so I’m a bit late posting my goals for the month.  Call it being over-extended, call it procrastination, call it just plain lazy.  Frankly, any one of those (and perhaps all) could be true at any given moment, so it doesn’t really matter what you call it.  I need some focus.  Thus the goals each month.  Here are July’s:

1. Work more regularly on SciFi site.  By more regularly, I mean that by the end of the month I want to know what the hell I’m doing, and have at least a rough idea about what I’m planning to do.

2. Submit at least three articles a week (7 days, not work week) to Examiner.com.

3. Figure out a schedule for us for when M. starts preschool in the fall and start following it at the end of the month.

4. Find another part-time job (real world, paying, a few hours a week).

5. Start eating healthier.  (Ass-reduction program, we’ll call it.)

There you have it.  Those are the things I would like to do this month.  What are you doing?  Lazing on the beach, working, procrastinating?  All of the above?

 
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Posted by on July 13, 2011 in Goals, Motivation, Organizing, SciFi, writing

 

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SciFi Fan? Read on!

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I have mentioned several times recently that I am working on a new project, managing and adding to a website.  I hadn’t mentioned the site before because I had (ideally) wanted to go over it with a fine-toothed comb before publicizing it.  I have managed only to go through some of it, but it only needs minor fine-tuning at this point, so I wanted to introduce it here.

ScienceFiction-Quality is the site created by my fellow scifi fanatic, Robin Larsen.  I have written reviews for it over the last couple of months, but have now taken over managing the site (although during the transition Robin has been wonderful about filling in the gaps as I learn all the ins and outs of the job).

It is a site dedicated to all SciFi fans, both new and long-term, and will hopefully introduce anyone interested to some of the best in SciFi.

The site reviews books, movies, short stories, authors and eBooks.  As time goes on we will be adding a blog and downloadable material.  At this point, we are concentrating on getting the site running at 100%, and on our newly-created newsletter/e-zine.

I have really enjoyed working with Robin, and on this site, so far and hope to do so for a long time in the future.  So stop on over and check it out.  Feel free to let me know if you think there is something that should be there that isn’t, although we have only just BEGUN with all of our favorite authors, books, etc. so it may just not be up there yet.

And be sure to sign up for the newsletter so you get updates on new reviews and information regularly.  The newsletter is a once-a-month feature at this point, although there could be special issues if something earth-shattering happens, so we promise not to overwhelm your inbox with daily updates!

 
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Posted by on July 10, 2011 in SciFi

 

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June Goal Wrap-up and Review

Picture I made for my goals article

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June was kind of a nutty month for me.  The kids got out of school, I started a new part-time job at our library, I took on the responsibility of managing a site I had previously only written reviews for, and I had some mid-month excitement with my son’s hospital visit.  I also started writing for Examiner.com as the Mansfield Family & Parenting 101 Examiner, which requires a few articles a week.

I didn’t do as well on my goals as I had hoped at the beginning of the month, but I feel ok about it because my priorities changed as things in my life changed, and I had to change my goals as that happened.

I’m hoping July will be a bit more predictable, but if it’s not I will try to roll with the punches.  Or whatever.

1. Add other section to book – I didn’t do this at all.  The book got put on hold with all the other new responsibilities.  I’m still trying to figure out how to fit it back in to my life so I can work on it, but I haven’t quite figured that out yet.

2. Increase my use of social media. – I feel like I did well on this one.  I try to tweet daily, and have something to say besides “here, read my new post” and I share things on Tumblr.  That also goes on my Facebook account, and I keep in touch with people through there to some extent too.

3. Use work schedule to better organize my time. – HA!  This one is amusing.  It didn’t happen.  Not even a little.

4. Guest post on another blog. – I did not do this.  I have not had time to think about articles for other blogs now because I’ve had enough trouble keeping up with my own!

5. Submit 1 new story/poem to three magazines/markets each. – Hrm.  No, not this one either.

That’s it.  Like I said, I didn’t carry out much on this list, but I did do other things so I’m not unhappy.  I have lots to do in July, so stay tuned for my current goals.

 
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Posted by on July 9, 2011 in Goals

 

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